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1. RotomGuy said on October 23, 2010, 11:58:52 AM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

Only four at the mo... meet... TAIBO AND KUMIGARU!! Plus, meet Shinpora's two prevolutions!

Embedded image Taibo

Evolution Line for Taibo    
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Level up with Happiness
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Embedded image Kumigaru
Evolution Line for Kumigaru    
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Level 53
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Embedded image SHiru
Evolution Line for Shira    
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Level 35
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Level 55
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So? Whatdya think?

Oekaki Pic of some fakemon: http://pokekaki.com/view.php?id=1526-1287944004

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2. Dilster3000 said on October 23, 2010, 12:11:41 PM (-07:00)

Haxorus
314 posts

Well I personally find it great that you animated it.
The animation looks great, you animated it in a creative way and I like the little jump there.
Now for the overall sprite, it looks seriously retarded.

I don't want to sound harsh, and I can tell, that it must have been hard to create each frame. But its shading is terrible, the outlining and form of its ears look seriously wrong.
Its face looks desperate compared to its evolution. The way you melted the pink color into the yellowish color is done bad.

I guess you're a beginner, so all I can say is great job.
But next time, I suggest you take some original Pokemon sprites and do more research by zooming in. To get perfect shading, form and outlines.

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3. RotomGuy said on October 23, 2010, 12:14:48 PM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

I focused on the animation mainly... so yeah. The ears I think could be improved, but I did the merging og the colours best I could, and I don't see much difference with Tabunne.

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4. OMGITSJAD said on October 23, 2010, 12:17:49 PM (-07:00)

Shaymin
2,490 posts

Ooh, very nice.
The eyes are the only thing I don't really like, otherwise great. Very good job at getting the animation to look a lot like B/W's!

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5. RotomGuy said on October 23, 2010, 12:52:14 PM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

Kumigaru is there now! Please comment!

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6. BlackRayquaza said on October 23, 2010, 12:55:10 PM (-07:00)

Floatzel
182 posts

Those look, wow. I can't explain how shocked I am. I LOVE THOSE!

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7. Luxray13579 said on October 23, 2010, 01:11:27 PM (-07:00)

Shaymin
2,679 posts

I really like the first one. The mouth is a bit small, but otherwise I really like it! The second one... Looks like too much of a copy.

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8. RotomGuy said on October 23, 2010, 01:14:17 PM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

Well, it's an evolution isn't it. Look at the Gear line... actully, I might make the clock work pokemon everyone wanted Gear ro evolve into.

9. SK said on October 23, 2010, 01:27:19 PM (-07:00)

Giratina
3,238 posts

Nice :3 I like the animation.

10. Aquablast said on October 23, 2010, 04:05:27 PM (-07:00)

Kyurem
2,074 posts

You did great Rotom.

11. RotomGuy said on October 23, 2010, 11:59:52 PM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

Shiru and SHipira are there now! CHeck them out!

12. Cat333Pokémon said on October 24, 2010, 12:24:23 AM (-07:00)

Administrator
10,307 posts

Ooh, those are quite nice. I like the cute face on Taibo, and Kumigaru looks like it matches quite well.

13. Shadow said on October 24, 2010, 11:08:01 AM (-07:00)

Giratina
3,209 posts

I think Taibo is my personal favourite out of the three. It could use some improvements, but it still looks the best.

14. RotomGuy said on October 24, 2010, 11:22:06 AM (-07:00)

Celebi
1,461 posts

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