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Welcome to the Victory Road. Like many others here, your road shall never end but you will always find new things on your path to success here. Just be sure not to be like any of the people who never finish or start there quest. The way to avoid failure and have nothing but success is to not only read the rules but follow them.
As for your grammar, it isn't horrible so why do people make fun of it? The only thing you did not do correctly was space the a from lot. 'Cause really it is supposed to be "a lot" and not "alot". However, this isn't a problem here at all. Oh yeah, you didn't capitalize the single "i" before the word stay. That too here isn't a big deal. Lastly, the word "whats" is really supposed to be "what's" but I doubt anyone will get on you about that either. Unless of course you're a Fanfiction writer and write fanfictions with those three mistakes. ;P
P.S. Three sentences isn't a paragraph. 
Edit: Piexing pointed out another mistake that I forgot, xD... Thanks!
what the others said. The only time you'll get a notice is when you barely use grammar in sentences like: "OMG haz yous een dat heeuj tignh ofer thar?" or something like that. As long as we can see what you're saying, and you're trying, you'll be just fine!
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