Awesome dude who you wrighting it for?? (BROSHISH)

Well done, Very well done!

I like it, a bit short, really. I think an instrumental would be cool. I know you worked hard on this, but I have just one change.

You're 1000 miles away, and there's a million things to say

That is me, because something you learn from pop culture is that people like association. Like in the song 1,2,3,4. Sometimes they use the word for and not four, because it is clever. Using a pattern of words appeals is what I am saying.

I'm gonna incorporate TeamPlasma's idea, but he gets the credit for that part.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Squirtle102 -Verse 1- You're 1000 miles away, and baby I just pray, that hopefully I'll be with you one day. Oooooooh. -Verse 2- I must think of anything to do, just so I can be with you. Cause you're 1000 miles away, and there are a million things to say, so I can be with you someday. Oooooooh. -Chorus- You're 1000 miles away, and there are some things I must say, cause we're writing this love song baby, you take my breath away. -Verse 3- >You know I feel this was< (Did you mean way instead of was?) and there's so much for me to say, you make me happy when things are bluuuuue. -Chorus- You're 1000 miles away, and there are some things I must say, cause we're writing this love song baby, you take my breath away. x2 Oooooooooh.

Thank you all for the support. I will change the one part to they're are a million things to say.

You should make a YouTube video of you singing the song. Broshish

It's not going on Youtube, broshish.

Are you a singer?

Used to be, ever since my voice dropped. Nay nay.

Lol, that's when I started.